I watched the fledgling widow
A charcoal figurine
A transcendent remembrance vista
White marble upon emerald green
Determinedly she made her search
Row upon row upon row
Pausing every so often
Before she made to go
Onward, ever onward
Until she found the very spot
Where her true love was laid to rest
He that time almost forgot
There she knelt on one knee
Dabbed her eye with handkerchief
Bowed her head with courtliness
Cold comfort begets fresh grief
For her the search now over
Little else could the widow gain
Save to absorb those precious moments
From afar I felt her pain
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Yes, grief awakens in moments of memory. 🖤
My thanks
Grief has no timetable. Cheers, Sir 🎩
Cheers to you, Sir
Cheers!
So true.
My thanks
This is sublime grief, Dear TOF!
I am bone chilled.
Lovin’ George’s tune here. Feels right on!
My thanks, young Resa. Some forms of sadness can have a magnet effect that I’m drawn to. Regards, TOF
TOF, it’s the compassionate artist in you.
Another slice of brilliance from Mr. Steed.
Cheers, Sir.
I was moved by your poem.
My thanks, Liz.
You’re welcome, Mike.
Dear Mike, this is the agonizing capture of grief, yet beautiful and bittersweet.
My thanks, Mia
wow
My thanks
Nicely done indeed. I was watching her along with the writer.
Best wishes, Pete.
Cheers, Sir
Very moving and beautiful, Mike.
Take care, Lauren
My thanks, Lauren
I am also touched by that
Link un abrazo Juan https://gobblersmasticadores.wordpress.com/2021/08/06/cold-comfort-begets-fresh-grief-by-mike-steeden/
Beautiful evocation of an ongoing pain that we all get to experience, sooner or later… I just love your update to your Copyright declaration, by the way:)).
Very kind of you to say, young lady. Regards, The Old Fool
Nice share and awesome blues, complimentary music strings.
My thanks. The music is one of my son, George Blamey-Steeden’s numbers. You’ll find him on Spotify etc. Thanks again, Mike